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写作其实并不是长句越多越好,比如在主体段的论据部分,因为长句涵盖信息多,所以比短句更充分具体。下面给大家介绍一下:雅思写作如何拓长句子。一起来看看吧。
使用介词短语:比如in a polite way,with the advance of...,to some extent,in some sense...
比如一个背景句:children are exposed to advertisements,这是一篇关于儿童广告该不该被禁止的作文。这个背景句加上几个介词短语,比如什么时候,在哪里,会更加具有时代性。
可以改为:
in today’s society, children are exposed to mountains of advertisements everywhere, from billboards at the subway station or on the internet or tv.
使用修饰词:adj & adv
adj n:a job--a well-paid and decent job.
adv adj: beneficial--mutually beneficial;highly addictive;financially independent.
v adv: communicate with others more efficiently and swiftly
使用并列结构:比如or, and,either...or,not only...but also...
比如:学好外语增加了求职机会。
翻译为:mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a job.
通过并列结构扩展:mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a job within the home country or of finding work abroad .
通过修饰词拓展:mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a well-paid and decent job within the home country or of finding work abroad .
通过介词短语拓展:mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a well-paid and decent job in a multinational company within the home country or of finding work abroad .
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